Natasha

Ah thanks! Didn't notice these things. The first verse has two stanza's. Perhaps you'll understand if you hear the music:

Thank you so much! Your review really made my day. I agree that an extra syllable in the line "I know I can't take much longer" would sound better in ...

Thank you so much! I actually meant to sing it myself, so that would be a female vocalist. I am first of all a singer who happens to love writing. ...

Ah thanks! I didn't know that.