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Re: Of Toads, Peaches and Teenage Angst - Chapter 4
Great job! I LOVE it so far!!!
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Rise of the Flames Chapter 3
Good job with the dialouge! I really like your story so far!! :D
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 3: Suberbia
The dialoge needs a little working on. I LOVE it though :) great job!!
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Great job with the beginning! I loved it! Your doing a great job with the story! Keep up the great work :)
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Mythos (Chapter Seven)
Really good! I enjoyed it a lot! I've read the other chapters but I like this one the best :D
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Clique Breaker:Chapter Five
Very good! This story is so great! Your doing a great job :)
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The First Son - Chapter 3
Great job! You really expressed the emotion! The title is good too! Made me want to press on it :D Keep writing!
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Waves of Death (see spoiler)
Good job! It was really deep and emotional! I loved it!
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: be the resistance
Hey! Great job! You were great expressing your feelings using words. The melody fit in quite nicely with the words. I liked it!
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Chapter One - When We Grow Up
Great first chapter! I liked it a lot! Can't wait till chapter 2 :D
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Hunted ch. 11
I LOVED IT! You are great at describing and expressing the words! Keep up the good work!
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Mythos (Chapter Eight)
Good job! I liked this chapter! Some grammar problems but IcyFlame pointed them out. Keep writing :D
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Collectors (part 3)
Very good :) I liked it. Nice story line. Good job! Keep writing! Narnialover4ever1
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Has Ben, Never Was Chapter 8
Aww this is so romantic. I just love stories like this! Great job! Bridgit is a very cool character. Keep writing :)
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Teenager's Guide to Exorcism - Chapter Two (2)
Confusing... I didn't understand who Alexander was. I like it so far and chapter 1 was great! Good job overall :D
Aug 28, 2011