Narnialover4ever1

:D So cute! I really liked it! Good job! 'My maiden's high up in her palace Spitting out the window My eyes shot arrows right to her face Guards chasing ...

Hello :) I liked it! very creative and it's easy to relate to! 'Most people do not rememeber a huge percentage of their dreams, but I live mine. I spend ...

:D Hey! I liked it! you seem to have a future as a singer/song writer. It's really cute and made me blush when I remeber some past crushes I had ...

:D :D I like it! Great fifth chapter! It was interesting and you kept it alive (which is very hard to do). Bravo! Keep up the good work! By the ...

This made me smile! I really like this line: 'Here I'm sitting, wondering What went wrong and when 'Cause kids today just live through the Net No more games with ...

I LOVED IT! wow, such a great theme and ending sentence! You should write more of these! You gave enough decriptive adjectives and it wasn't to long (which I thank ...

Good third chapter! I really liked it! You kept it interesting and alive. I really like your characters they are really great! Can't wait to read the next chapter :) ...

Very good! I liked it! It was deep, dark and had a lot of great adjectives. I liked the more descriptive sentences they really spoke to me, the reader. Good ...

You did a good job of detailing the story. The details were not to long or to short, which I liked. You needed som commas in places but overall I ...

Hello! :) I really liked it! good job! Your character was great and very expressive, which I liked. I saw some places where you needed commas but I think someone ...

Hey :) I really liked it. It was a bit confusing at first. There are spelling mistakes. I liked your character Sally though. She seemed real to me. I enjoyed ...