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Re: Savior: Chapter Four
Hmm... it was a bit choppy but a great story overall. 'Weird. This girl was very strange but I bet if I was a hard-ass christian, people would probably think ...
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Re: Happy Unhappy Ending: Chapter 4
'I smiled. “Yeah, people just love punishing me. My old friends, my mom and probably my sister too when I get home.” I said and lay back in the grass. ...
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Re: The Art Murderers Ch 4 (Edit 4)
Aww I LOVE DEXTER!!! Good job!!! :D I think this is the best story I've read on here... :D Keep up the good work! This was really sweet! Keep writing, ...
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Re: Chapter 5: May Traverse
I LOVED this second chapter! Good job! A bit confusing but I got through that part :D Keep writing! you seem like a talented writer! Keep up the good work, ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Hidden Illusions Chapter 2
Hmm... very interesting :). I liked it! Brittany is very cool! She seems real! I am looking forward to the next chapter :) Good job! I'm gonna follow you :D ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Hidden Flame: A dragon's secret Chapter 3 pt.2
Good second chapter! I really liked it! Your characters have great personalities and seem real! I think my favorite character is Vanessa but Shang is very cool! Keep up the ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Crying Softly
Good job :) I really liked it! It was deep and emoitonal :) Keep up the good work :D
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Removed.
I really liked what you had so far! Keep up the good work :) I'll be following you :D
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Hear me
Wow! I loved this! I tried singing it to my guitar and it really worked! Good job. Keep up the good work and keep writing! You seem like a really ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Massiveness of How Sad It Is to Want Someone (2.1)
A little bit confusing in the middle, but I figured it out. I really like it! Good job! Your characters are really alive and seem real! Keep writing and keep ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Hidden Flame: A dragon's secret Chapter 2
Great job! I really liked it! A bit confusing at the end, but that might just be me. I get confused a lot ;). Great second chapter! It was very ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Gravestone pt.2
Aww this was so sad! I felt like crying at the end! Good job and keep up the good work! The beginning was a little confusing but the ending was ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: I need help Believing....
:D Good job! My favorite part was... 'So I tell you,All of this and more. You understand and change,And you don’t walk out the door.' It was very deep :) ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Destiny's Call: Chapter Four
Oooh a Transformer fanfic! I liked it! It was a bit confusing, though. Good job. I like Prime Star the best :D Good job! :)
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 6 - Gaining Perspective
:D I really liked it! Good job on the sixth chapter! It wasn't boring and seemed alive. You might need to add some commas but overall I found it exciting, ...
Aug 28, 2011