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Re: What love could be
Well I do not know how you did it but you did! You seemed to creep inside my mind and found a deja vu memory of sort. This piece is ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Bullets
This was more of a abstract story to me. Very generalized and allows the to draw his or her own story. Although it did not flow in the way of ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Untitled
I'm more of the actual poetry critic side of reviews instead of the grammar. There are enough members out there to do that. I like your poem. It captures the ...
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: I am fire
There is a certain mysterious quality behind this whole work [as all poetry does]. But this poem has this evil behind the wording of it. Within the third stanza, when ...
Feb 12, 2009
