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Re: Smile (an absence of confidence)
Nice.. I like the ryhming and whole flow of it all. Some bits are really powerful in meaning. Maybe consider trying to write lyrics more literally (like telling what actually ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Fear
I like it. Very deep. It has a nice flow. You sort of have to concentrate to understand the true meaning behind it all. I don't really understand: Your eyes ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: The Last Storm (3)
I really like this story. Until the very end i wanted to keep reading. And I REALLY want to know what happens next. I think Mary is a character who ...
Jan 5, 2010