NaRachel

Hi :) I love the simplicity of this song, the short lines really worked! You should elaborate a bit and make it longer. Its not the most poetic piece but ...

Hi :) I agree with the other reviewers. I thought it was great! Completely captured all my emotions and put them into words. I really loved your second verse, it ...

Hey :) you should put this in the lyrics section in misc. Work if its a rap :)

Sighhhhhhhhh. Now i got that out of the way :)... You know that feeling you get every now and then where you read something and your whole mind just goes ...

This made me want to cry and I don't cry easy so Well done. There was something really touching about the "I'm sorry's" - there's someone who I wish I ...

Hey :) I really liked it! It had passion, and you pulled of that passion with some genuine rhyming and quality so well done!! :) The only part i'm not ...

Hi :) Ambiguos yet effective. It created sinister feelings and repulsion- in a very good way. The short lines are really interesting! I really like this part: anti-freeze, dribble down ...

Oh my god its you again!! Haha i saw the title and felt I had to read it, so well done with making an interesting title to start of with! ...

Hey :) First of all, your too young to be thinking about love! Haha i'm only kidding.The whole thing looks like you wrote it in a little bit of a ...

Hey :) Wow. This looks like it was very carefully thought out and must have taken a long time to write- i wouldn't know because i've never written rap but ...

Ooooooh clever :) Must admit i had to google who it was- my excuse being that I'm Australian and i don't watch the news (neither of which are valid)....lol ANYWAY ...

Oh my god, yes its me again. Sorry if my reviews are annoying you, but i was just going through lyrics and yours is coming up quite a bit. Ok ...

Hey :) I think I just reviewed another one of your pieces, awks if it wasn't yours but anyway. I really liked this, it flowed really good-the rhythm and rhyming ...

Hey :) I liked it!! I think the part i liked so much was the rhythm, it just flowed really brilliantly. Despite having never heard the tune i was humming ...

Hey :) This is really, really beautiful. It has this earthy simplicity to it and yet there's the constant metaphor of the girl being the flower which makes it simply ...