NYCnightowl007

Hey there! First off, I think this song is a little bit redundant. You say falling angel or angel a lot, and even though it's the point of the song, ...

Hello there. The first thing that caught my eye was the name - it's really intriguing and that's why I clicked on it. :) I feel a little like the ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS! I hope you like the site so far. This song was a bit cliche. Like we've heard it all before kinda deal. But the words ...

I agree with @thefireinmeisJC: it is a tad cliche. I also find the whole a little short, almost like I'm expecting something else, but it never comes. Maybe you could ...

First off, this song is something I would download in my MP3 player. I would listen to it. It is very original, even though the topic is very familiar. It's ...

Hey. The first thing off is that your title caught my attention, which is awesome "curb appeal", if you will. The first part was a tad confusing, as in that ...

I liked your use of words, yet they didn't seem to really flow. It would be great if you could distinguish between the verses and the chorus, as that would ...

I have absolutely no idea what this all means. But I liked it. It was quite, quite beautiful. It made me smile. Minds are dry, when hate is wet. What ...

Hey there. I really enjoyed this. I like how the first verse was normal and the chorus was dark. It makes a good contrast. Just like Black Night Werecat said, ...

Even though I liked it, I have some things that troubled me: I felt as though I were thrown too quickly into the plot and didn't have enough time to ...

Hey there! There were some things I had some trouble with: When the narrator says "this house needed mom badly", I didn't know what to think. I didn't think it ...

Hey there. I was struck by your use of words; for example: "I was decently drunk ...". I loved that. But it feels like you're really trying to point out ...