Myth

Things make a lot more sense when Myth's brain overloads. I look forward to reading more. :D

The One and Only Imp : *bows* I'm afraid I got confused with all my chapters so I've had to rewrite a few so it will probably be some time ...

I think the question mark shout stay as 'exclaimed' gives the impression that he shouts. Lol, you though Klee was a person and Wires was a man! *laughs* Ah, my ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Mattira let out a soft cry and threw up her free arm to ward of the light. ‘of’ = off ...

I liked the first three books. The next two just didn't do it for me, I don't think I finished either of them. They were interesting and ,sadly, I spent ...

You're always welcome and here is more. * Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Eventually they came to a pair of perfectly ordinary sliding doors which ...

Myth - freaked out, huh? In a good way or a bad way? Good way, it makes the story a whole lot more interesting. :D

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * “You weren’t there,” he hissed bellow his breath, still not looking at his king, “you didn’t hear it, you didn’t ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Night had fallen over the sphere and the only light that he could see was either coming from various pieces ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * That night they stopped in a tiny clearing about seventy yards or so from the Academe. This seems just too ...

Thanks for all your catches all, I'll edit as soon as I've completed my revision. Adam : Ran was drunk so I suppose it doesn't really matter what he said ...

I think I was going to mention refreshing in more detail but decided against it. The government pays for a base body, which is usually weaker that the one you ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * He took a deep breath and blew it away, watching the spherical light fall away from him like a feather. ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Before I forget, you should rate this (PG-13 or R). He had requested [s]that he was[/s] to be stationed t ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * The whole next day Karenna watched as Shana watched her. Shana = Shanna ;) That first sentence is awkward; I ...