Myth

I'm not any good at critiquing(sp?) poems but this just made me laugh.

Gawd, you actually read all that? I'm glad you liked it, I'm planning the next part now and won't post until.. maybe tomorrow. Thanks for reading. :D

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Thanks for reading Boni Bee. I'll take a look at the entries and make changes.

^ Ditto. :D

Much better, you should edit this part in so new readers don't get confused.

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So doe, every time the Boatman is mentioned I should use a capital "H" to symbolise power? Ie: "powers beyond belief, He burned her soul and He washed her mind ...

Maybe when someones speak of the Boatman you could capitalise 'H' so it reads 'He' or just put the thinking in italics.

*Locked*

This was a little confusing but I like how there is a mixture of era like Medival/Modern, the newspaper and the parade.

Thank you! I'm a history dork too, so you're not alone. :D The story will take place in many, many historical sites and I promise to make it more interesting. ...

Thanks but if nobody else reads it and comments whats the point? I have writers block and my life is over.

The guy didn't get murdered. In my story vampires don't actually kill their victims but leave them a little confused. Hopefully I'll get rid of writers block and come up ...

Oops! I'll fix that! :D Thanks for reading I did it under pressure and that's when I write best. I was stuck on the end and rushed it so I'll ...