Myth

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Thunder boomed as lightning raced across the darkness of the midnight sky. Rain poured upon the soot black tiles of ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * The silky darkness which slithered in the place of day was lightened by the sparkling stars and gleaming moon overhead. ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Indigo = Quote Black = Review * Chapter 1 Her crew was busy, bustling around on the deck making sure everything was perfect. I ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * She came to a door, a heavy door made from metal and when she placed her palm upon it a ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Looking back at it now, it was the most heart-wrenching choice he had ever made and ever will make: To ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * This wasn’t Earth, afterall--no Earth dreams on sleek Avdotya , no dreams at light speed darting into eternity. Is Avdotya ...

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * “I hope so…’has been anyhow. Gavno,” he turned sharply to the screen. Fyodor, scrolled across, in the Latin and then in Cyrillic. I ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * He [ ? ] perfectly at home in the dark, traipsing across the uneven ground like it was noon-day in ...

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review Malik Kahliel woke up in a hospital bed, an iv in his arm. ‘iv’ = IV “ Dude. Nkemire has a really cool idea. ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * They headed away from thir dying planet, travelling into the deep unknown of space. Their search for life would begin, ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * For a moment he felt that he was seven, waking out of a three-day coma after Girec’s beating . I ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Cerreno raised a hand in greeting when he was still a good ways off. Minor typo: ‘ways’ = way So ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * He had written the name large enough to take up the whole center of the sheet and Mattira was right, ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Danteel had been Moncreif’s slave over seven years before I came to the Avarice . I was very young then, ...

The only things I noticed were typos but you can find them easily through the next read. I think I’m a little freaked out by this girl and her parents, ...