Myth

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * What happens next? Another question it's always great to know the answer to, but unfortunately one that we don't often ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * “I know it, Helen told me, you want her to go home, and your going to keep me here,” Emily ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * “Helen, I think we need to get you on some sort of medication to help us run some tests,” Dr. ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * I frowned and touched the small button that turned off my iPod and half-turned in the reddish brown dust of ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Four rings of the old grandfather clock marked midnight , the old orphanage was silent as every child was fast ...

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * I walked around the corner of the dark, moon-lit alleyway, my fist clenched around the handle of the blood drenched metal hammer. I ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Sera stood, coming to sit on the ground beside the cot he laid in. ‘laid’ = lay “Well, that was ...

Only thing I noticed: "I saw ." She pulled back and spanned to face him, willing him to believe. "My brother had my face." I think you mean ‘span’. This ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Fifteen-year old, brunette Clara walked down the dead-empty sidewalk that bordered the dead-empty street connecting her small neighborhood

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * “You’re dying.” Liza announced, hoping that it didn’t sound too much like a renunciation and emitting one prudent look toward ...

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * “Your grandfather told us never to go down here .” ‘here’ = there She and Bryon descended the stairs, and after a moment ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * Clouds raced on the sky at an impossible pace, their dark colors blending in with the yellows, oranges and purples ...

Green = Comment/Correction Black = Review * Cinderella ran, fled the house , the rags that had just been a party dress fluttering at every step. ‘house’ made me think ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * And after the quill finished writing the inscription and date in perfect form, its master feverously continued scratching on the ...

Green = Comment/Correction Blue = Suggestion Black = Review * When Seth came to he was confused at first. He wondered why he was lying on the floor and the ...