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  • Poetry » Satire, Politics Re: deleted

    You paint a powerful picture with your words. As it shows not only Judgement in the governments but abuse of men always over powering women. The title is really catch ...

    May 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Remnants Of Beauty

    WOW!!! Your descriptions of everything was really beautiful ( my favourite was the petals) How you describe autumn is incredible, the language you use and how you use it leaves ...

    May 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Doll Face

    This made me cry!!!! This is really beautiful, how this person or 'doll' as you have her is one that has let society chose her life and made her into ...

    May 15, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Fae's Next Target

    You're writing style is extremely descriptive. The story is thrilling exciting and really captured my attention. Your characters are really well detailed and I can tell you are a fantastically ...

    May 13, 2015


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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