MyndiIkkoku

I mean, you can most definitely keep that repetitiveness. It doesn't totally detract from the piece, it's just something I tend to look out for. You're very welcome.

Actually, no, that comma is correct. A semi-colon should only ever be used between two complete sentences. That would make the sentence grammatically incorrect if a semi-colon were to be ...

I was considering switching the italicized parts, but when I thought about it, you'd think of italicized as...less real. Although the normal font was all in Michaela's head, it represented ...

Thank you so much for the review. I was really hoping this type of thing would work (it's been working so far, so that's good), since I'd never done anything ...

Thank you for reading and reviewing, first off. When I wrote the story, I knew I was risking a lot doing it this way. And, it's weird how it's so ...

Ah, there is no such thing as loss of imagination. It will always be there. You just have to have the willpower to activate it and stimulate it constantly. But ...

Thanks for reading, first off. I should make a story like that, shouldn't I? Was a while back when I wrote this, and was considering rewriting it, but I think ...

First off, thank you for taking the time to read and write a review. Props to you. :) Yes, I realize how weird that sounds now, a while after writing ...

Hi there! :P Yeah, this story doesn't elaborate on anything. I think when I wrote it, it was supposed to be a little "flash fiction" kind of thing, where the ...

Thank you for your review - love how this site has people who actually read things, hah! This story here is one that I wrote a long time ago that ...