My1Story

writing in present tense is very hard. i noticed that in a few sentences there were mistakes such as, "Peter goes after Hook and hide under the ship and listen ...

I think that this is beautiful. the humor and emotional parts were all well placed. the only thing i will pick on is the dialogue in the beginning. it seems ...

this short story cracked me up.:) at first, i was thinking, oh! it must be something illegal! is he a criminal. then the girl was mentioned and i thought, oh! ...

I love stories like this! Stories that deal with the lives of troubled teens are oddly intriguing. This first look sets up the story very well. I can't wait to ...