MuttsuriMorose

Thanks. I'll be able to fix those errors l. I hope you were able to still enjoy the first chapter.

Thank you for the review...the name just happens to be the same. The first chapter is meant to be simplistic, but it will have more showing in later chapters. As ...

There is a good description of where this takes place. It makes you imagine what the day is like, what happened, and the rough area where they are. I feel ...