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Re: Poem For Hot Days
A;right, good stuff, thanks. I think I'll slice and dice it today. Maybe throw in a nice metaphor or whatever they're called. I'm just glad I got something down, usually ...
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: Lord of the Flies
This book was great. I would say easily Top 25 books of all time. Maybe not up there like The Catcher in the Rye, but still one of the greats.
May 13, 2008 -
Re: First Drink
Upon rereading this I got an idea. You could always turn this into a poem. Add some concrete images and the transformation would be pretty easy. Just an idea.
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Steve the Goldfish
Thanks for the criticism. I'm having some issues with the whole "bed of lies" part. I'm going to play with it a bit. And thanks for the positive review also. ...
May 12, 2008 -
Re: Genocide
Ah my first criticism, nice points and all, especially the father looking back one. And thanks for the uplifting too, can't hurt.
May 11, 2008