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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: The Tiptoe Battlefield

    Thank you so much for even taking time to read it!

    Dec 8, 2012
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: The Tiptoe Battlefield

    Thanks for the feedback!

    Sep 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Horror, Fantasy Re: My House of Cards

    It gives me a bunch of ideas, I like that it isn't so overly detailed that the reader can come up their own scene. Couldn't find anything to correct.

    Sep 5, 2012


In short, Mrs. Pontellier was beginning to realize her position in the universe as a human being, and to recognize her relations as an individual to the world within and about her.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening