Munchkinzizzles

Hey, Abigail! I'm not a very good reviewer, but here goes. Simple Corrections: My mother insisted that I attend public ice skating with Ashley every Friday night since I was ...

:( So sad. But so good! :) You are really good. Have you ever considered writing a longer romantic fiction? Have you already? If you haven't, please do! That was ...

I think that was the edited version. Here's my suggestion: Expand the story a little bit. Get into the first chapter. Perhaps then, the prologue won't seem so meaningless. And ...

Monster The blood spattered the window with a sound resembling that of rain on a summer day. Awesome description here! It makes me almost hear it because the sound of ...

Hm...how would I like to die? Okay, the name that I want the character to have is Mickayla, or Micki, whichever one. I would like to die by tripping over ...

This is pretty good, I have to say. Um...I really don't have anything to say about your work, because I don't think that there's really anything to correct. Would you ...