MrGreen

Hello Bobster28 First of all I really must congratulate you on what is a magnificent little story. It is well-written and excellently thought out, with an extremely satisfying twist at ...

I really like this poem. It is unusual but has a nice rhythm to it, and I love your sparing but effective use of language, as it conjures up some ...

This is an interesting piece of writing with some excellent potential. The style of your writing is unique, and although in places it doesn't always work, I think that with ...

This is fantastic! I was looking forward to reading the second chapter of this story, and it certainly does not disappoint. It easily as good, if not better, than chapter ...

This is an interesting story and the premise is original; which is nice to see in a medieval fantasy setting. Its also good that you have used a protagonist who ...

This is an original and well-written piece of writing. The narrative drive and purpose is almost flawless, and, as far as I can ascertain there were no typing or punctuation ...

This is an intriguing little story which displays great imagination. It draws the reader in almost immediately with its simple and direct prose; something which is essential to all good ...

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. It flows well, and I think that the choppiness that you refer to, and the fact that not every part rhymes, only contributes to ...

This is an interesting and captivating prologue. It is well-written and has the potential to grow into something very good. Your prose style is simple yet evocative; and I particularly ...

This a competent adaptation of the Hook legend; it is well-written and flows nicely from beginning to end. However if I could be permitted to make one criticism; you could ...

This is a very good piece of writing; and an enjoyable one too. The exposition is handled extremely well, and the background detail regarding the werewolf houses is original and ...