Mr.Knightley

*kicks the person who didn't like LOTR* :) I actually like that book now. I guess I'm cured of a bad case of twisted judgment. :wink: My current least favorite ...

Thanks for that! I wrote a revised edition, if you want to read it! It's the one called Something Wicked This Way Comes.

Hi! Thanks to both of you for the critiques! They're great. However, I do have one thought: What kind of title would be best? I'm not very good at thinking ...

Holy goodness!!! That's so awesome Kat! Thanks!!! I actually did write has, instead of had. I don't know what happened there... *fixes it* But I am ecstatic right now... I ...

Awesome! I'm completely surprised that you liked it that much! It makes me feel great. Thank you both! :D :)

I guess I'm confused more than hateful. Doesn't Silmarillion drag on more than the Fellowship did? Maybe it's just me.. Not for me, no. The chapters can be read by ...

Hi! Thanks for your feedback. I'm glad that you both enjoyed it. :) To starlit.isle: I'm not sure what a good replacement word for 'that' would be. Do you have ...

Tried that! She's stubborn...

Nope, not even an autograph. *sighs, stares out window, hoping one day she will "come back"*

Wow! That sounds awesome. (and blessedly original ;)) I should look it up a bit...

Wow. This is exactly what I've come to realise. I'm glad that you found that too! I agree that God gives us what we need, when we need it. And ...

Hi again! To everybody who posted: thank you. It means a lot. :) And, for the record, I did italicize (spelled right?) the last part, but I had done it ...

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Thanks you guys! I appreciate both of your reviews; they really helped me. It is so exciting to get my first critiques on YWS. I was really in a hurry ...

Is there a revised edition forthcoming? I hope so...