Mousey

"Gosh does this woman ever shut up." Jeff thought as his new guidance counselor drug on and on. This sentence didn't really make sense, drug doesn't belong here did you ...

I think this is good but it has the potential to be more than good. I don't know why but I got the impression that Lillian was terminally ill, I ...

I really liked this, it made me want to keep on reading. I was just thinking that maybe you could add a small description about what a storm in it's ...