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Re: Nights of despair
Thanks Hannah! I'll check it out. :)
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Writing my plight (knives and pens)
thank you! and exactly, it goes great with the purpose of this website I think :)
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Writing my plight (knives and pens)
Thank you so much. The rhythm of my poem doesn't match the song it's just based off the message of the song which is choosing to find a way out ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: Writing my plight (knives and pens)
Thank you so much! I appreciate that you pointed those errors out I will definitely change them :) and my poem is inspired by a song called knives and pens ...
Sep 23, 2013 -
Re: A gentle fear.
You are welcome! :)
Sep 22, 2013 -
Re: A gentle fear.
The imagery was exquisite! "The ghouls will keep me safe. The sirens will sing to me. The monsters will rock me to sleep." Great use of personification I loved it!!
Sep 22, 2013 -
Re: Nights of despair
Thank you, I really appreciate your comment. and I will make some changes to improve it!
Sep 21, 2013 -
Re: Nights of despair
Thank you so much! I will definitely make some changes.
Sep 21, 2013
