Morticiansdaughter19

The imagery behind that was really good and the message could be interpreted in many ways, what is the story behind this girl? who is paper girl? "Insults are your ...

Its interesting and very well written. This is a disease many women and young girls struggle with and I think this poem would be a good wake up call on ...

Its definitely good considering its your first poem and you wrote it in 30 seconds haha. "In a shattered heap, Crushed beneath their feet" if you have the comma after ...

That was really good. Just one suggestion though, I think that your line "that glowing like a small lamp," would sound better without the "that" in front of it. or ...