Mortality

ah the summer, poems about summer are very common thou this one seamed different somehow. Keep writing, maybe on a different season next time. I enjoyed it.

I actually liked it. I can't point out the errors, i don't know why? It just seams something is...off when i read it. I don't know maybe someone else can ...

Hey, this is really good, despite the fact I'm not into Dark Poem :D. So it's good that i like it! Means you have turned me to the darkside!

Hey, i really like your writing, keep it up. The lyrics were very good, and it just really stands out(good thing!) Any and all problems have been mentioned by everyone ...

Well since this was posted on April 1st, its pretty obvious its a joke. Although the talking egg was very cool,lol, if you serious ed this up it would still ...

Hello Alice! I acutally liked it! It was very good, and pretty deep. I hope you write some more!