Morrigan

Yeah I'm trying to figure out how to do that without losing the brevity and momentum in the poem. But I'll get it there. Thanks for the suggestion :)

The "you" in the poem is supposed to actually be a bottle of vodka. But like, I wanted it to be kinda ambiguous? So the "your vodka" is like the ...

I'll have to disagree with you. Preserving the arts can take many forms, including promoting the evolution of it. By you saying that you prefer to preserve the arts, you ...

Capitalization is seen as a stylistic choice in poetry. Thanks. I will ignore any punctuation and grammar that I wish within my works to create the desired effect. If you ...

Hi there winterspirit13. Thank you for your thoughts. In poetry, capitalization is generally seen as a stylistic choice. I chose not to capitalize anything to create the feeling that the ...

Thanks, Kayla. Okj was considering changing "minute" because a lot of other people didn't seem to get it either. I'm not using it in the sense of time, but minute ...

ok well i hate her

The dandelions are dealing over the curtain rod. If you notice, I used enjambment at that part and did not use a comma. So the dandelions and the curtain rod ...

Why do you think rhyme would make it better?

Please reply to this so I can remember to come back and review after I get off of work :)

What questions do you have about the formatting? I'm always looking to improve, but I'm not sure what you mean by that! Let me know what seemed off :) Thanks ...

Thanks! Liquid nitrogen is extremely cold, like her hands. I wanted to play with the idea of cold and "cool," not in the literal sense, but in the personality sense. ...

Thanks for your thoughts. While it might be overdone, it's true. I just moved to California and I'm trying to fit in with my cousin's friends. True story, bro. Thanks ...

Ah, sorry. It's early ^_^

Thanks!