Morrigan

Hey! Thank you for your thoughts. I am going to leave the connections purposefully vague because it is a poem about a mental breakdown, after all, and it's meant to ...

I have no idea what that's like, but have you ever tried picking a photo and describing what you see in it as the backdrop to a poem? Not sure ...

The "dig down" part was supposed to format differently. More of a diagonal than a straight down.

Thank you so much

Hey there! I didn%u2019t see this til now. I appreciate your more specific critique! I am using enjambment in my poem, which doesn%u2019t necessarily break the lines with punctuation. I ...

Obviously everything is subjective. But if that%u2019s how you wanted the metaphor to be conveyed, perhaps try adding a direction. The image isn%u2019t clear enough. It also melds into the ...

Thank you! About your first note, it kind of shifts focus. There are several videos out there of policemen just knocking over peaceful protesters and leaving them, so I wanted ...

I did just read your wall post. While I enjoyed the motif because it was consistent, I do think it would be very interesting if you chose to rewrite it ...

@whatchamacallit, is this better?

Thank you! I appreciate this!

That depends on the pronunciation of the word. If you're using a plural possessive, say darkness' , then there is an extra syllable. If you're saying "the boy's" then it's ...

Can you be more specific? What exactly made the poem feel like it doesn't end? Why was it confusing when I used the house metaphor? Why weren't the last two ...

Thank you for your thoughts! The way you interpreted this is interesting. I did not mean to have a poem so devoid of emotion; in fact, it's bursting with it. ...

Thanks! This is super helpful!

Thank you for your thoughts! I think I have an idea for revising that last stanza that will also bring the goddess more into the poem. I'll tag you in ...