Morran

I wonder if there's a penalty for plagiarism.

Ahh, yeh.. instead of saying "it felt like forever" I wrote about years passing. It sounded less cliche. ^^:;;; Sorry if it was a little confusing. I might take a ...

Flash fiction. This was more of an exercise in... something... but I forgot what. Anyway, I liked how it turned out, and so I kept it. I need to write ...

I can take a look at it, certainly! .... I tend to get wordy with my comments, though....

This is all I have so far. I have to work on it more, and I might rewrite it to be a little darker. But I'm not sure. I might ...

Thank you!! It's much appreciated. Telling me what you really liked is sometimes just as effective as telling me what you didn't. Again, I am grateful for the comments. And ...

Thankee!! This was one of my favorite essays to write. And oddly enough, *I* haven't even bathed in olive oil. Yet. But after writing this, I think I might want ...

Sophia put the book down on her lap, troubled. Did Wash really think of Grandfather like that? It was true that the accident had happened before even Adair was born, ...

:) Heh. Well, it's already gone through some editing, but I'll still take any comments or critique I can get. Thanks!

Thanks for the input - very much appreciated. :) I was working on another story to come after this, but it turned out crappy, so I'm pretty much starting over ...

Thank you both for the input. Even one word helps me gauge this story. :) My friend, the comma, oh, how I love thee.... (Comma usage intentional.) Now that I ...