Moraca101

I've been struggling with how to begin this for a while, but your suggestion is really nice. I think I will rewrite all of it and continue this later.

First of all, thank you. I have enough people telling me that "It's so good!" In my day to day life. I put it here for the express reason of ...

I didn't know about the "don't capitalize I if you aren't going to do the rest" thing, so thank you. The last two stanzas have purposeful capitalization because it is ...

The "drip drip drop" and "snikt snikt snikt" is a clue as to what happened. I understand that it doesn't sound quite right. I've never been good at flowing poetry. ...

thank you!

May I ask what is happening in the fifth stanza, it is a bit unclear.