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Re: Falling
I just read your poem, and it's probably by far one of my favorites so far on the site. The title, Falling, is perfect for this piece. I interpret falling ...
Feb 9, 2012 -
Re: Paragon, Chp 1
Hi, firefly! I really like this world you created here. It has a sense of comic book narration with action packed suspense. However, I think you should make it a ...
Jan 27, 2012 -
Re: Ignis: The Fire (Chapter 1)
Luce has two selves? You've got me interested. I was hooked at the first line. Hope to read more of your postings! So far, you have a very flowing style. ...
Jan 22, 2012
