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MoonlightForest

  • Short Story » Spiritual, Mystery / Suspense Re: Drown the Spider

    Hi EternalRain, As far as your constructive comments, I think the point I was trying to get across in the piece was Marin's complete lack of empathy/understanding towards Bella. The ...

    Feb 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Cup's Cradle

    First off, I just want to say I am so sorry I didn't get the notification for your brilliant and insightful commentary. I really appreciate it because I've been trying ...

    Feb 24, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic Re: Infatuation

    This is hands-down the best compliment I've ever recieved. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on a piece I wrote from the heart. I too ...

    Feb 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic Re: Infatuation

    Thanks Honora! I'm glad you liked it. I hope to hear more of your kind words on my latest works!

    Feb 20, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic Re: Infatuation

    Hey there! Thanks for your constructive feedback. In addressing the reason for our separation, there honestly was never one communicated. In the piece I'm reminiscing about what could have been ...

    Feb 20, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic Re: Infatuation

    Hi, thanks so much for the thoughtfulness of your review! Honestly, the lack of plot has a lot to do with me just writing in this stream-of-consciousness style and failing ...

    Feb 20, 2020
  • Short Story » Other, Realistic Re: Human Touch

    Wow, this is an excellent piece of flash fiction! I appreciate the fact that you address the entire concept of touch without a dull moment. Your prose is very clear ...

    Feb 19, 2020
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: I Hope this is Okay to Publish

    Thank you thank you thank you! I agree with your edits. :) It's a bit rough on the edges because I didn't plan on going back and reworking it, but ...

    Sep 8, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: I Hope this is Okay to Publish

    Thank you so much! :D I definitely see some gaps in areas that I touched upon little, but at the same time, this was largely the product of free-writing. Also, ...

    Sep 8, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: I Hope this is Okay to Publish

    Thank you so much for your kind words! :) I had a bit of trouble spelling, especially words with double consonants. For some reason my spell-check wasn't enabled this time, ...

    Sep 8, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Hypochondriac Chapters 7-9

    First of all, I want to apologize for taking so long myself to respond. I too am starting with college again, this being my Junior year. Yay me! What year ...

    Aug 25, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Hypochondriac Chapter 4

    If that is something you're willing to do, I will totally accept the gesture. I am really trying to get everything out as quickly as possible with the hope that ...

    Jul 9, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Hypochondriac Chapter 4

    First of all, just wanted to say I'm so effin happy I have a fan! That pretty much made my whole week. Also, it's short because well, writer's block. I ...

    Jul 8, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Hypochondriac: Chapters 1-3

    First of all, I love this review! Thank you for specifically detailing what you liked/disliked. This is the beginning of a long process that will hopefully lead to a novel ...

    Jul 8, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Hypochondriac: Chapters 1-3

    Thank you so much for the positive feedback! I am 19 years old now and have been a member of this site since 2013. Needless to say, I've come a ...

    Jul 8, 2019


pain is that feeling when you are feeling hurt, but it never goes away leaving me hurt. oh it hurts.
— Dragonthorn