MoonlightAssassin

Frankly, I really like this poem. It seems to have a deeper meaning within it that some people might not see. The only thing that I really think could be ...

I'll edit this for you real quick... My edits and comments are in red. It's a nice idea and makes for a good one-shot, but it needs some tweaks here ...

Hahahaha... That was epic. Nice job. I agree with some of the other reviewers, the end isn't as expected, but it works out oh so wonderfully! It made me laugh ...