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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Drowning

    Thankyou I really appreciate the feedback! :)

    Jul 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Drowning

    Thank you! :)

    Jul 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Drowning

    Thanks for such positive feedback! :D

    Jul 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Drowning

    Thanks for the review! I'll keep all that in mind :) you give great advise!

    Jul 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Drowning

    Thanks so much for the review, your feedback is really helpful :D I did try having lungs, body and mouth without my but I couldn't decide :P thanks for your ...

    Jul 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Better Fly, Butterfly

    I like the title :D

    Jul 19, 2013


'Tis the season to shovel enormous amounts of watermelon into your mouth while hunched over the cutting board like a dehydrated vampire that hasn't fed on blood in four hundred years and the only viable substitute is this questionable Christmas-colored fruit.
— Ari11