MonsieurRosseau

EDIT: I made it longer. (Mentally subtract two from my review count.)

Thanks for the critique, Mars. I should probably write the rest of the beginning, because this seems to be the last two scenes. Maybe it'll feel less rushed then. (Though ...

See, I thought about that, but the ending lacked the certain random style that the rest had, and seeing daylight is a bit serious. Thanks for the advice, though!

Thanks for the review. Her "night of sin" was the fey party. Where does it lose rhythm?

Good job! Except one part were the Zombie Watch Committee guy answers the phone saying "Brains?" Wouldn't one be a bit suspicious? Strange way to awnser the phone i think ...

Thank you, Pippiedooda and Crazy Sock Lover (117) for your reviews. I feel informed. Just one question, though. The person looming in the pale hallway light was slightly odd. It ...

Ah, most delicious. It's always nice to read a vignette like this. It's short, non-sequitur, and pleasant to read. I'd say it's the literary equivalent of a well-crafted icon. In ...