Monki

Uh, yeah. Mandy is a woman's name...

WOAH, WOAH, WOAH, WOAH. Don't think like that. She's like a really good friend to me now. She was my teacher, kay? And now, she's like one of my really ...

Thank you for your critique, Ringo. I'll use it to the best of my ability when I edit this (if I ever find the time to). :) Peace,

I finished reading it about three months ago! You all were right! Wonderful book! Thanks for the opinions!

OH MY GOD! I just realized that this piece has been given not one, not two, not three, not four, not five, but SIX gold stars!!!!!!!! (And no, I don't ...

Aw! Thanks Becca! I was worried about the commas... I'm not too good with that. I'm so happy that people actually like this. It's quite depressing actually, because it's based ...

Wow! Thank you! On the contrary, I felt that it was too short, but now I'm kind of happy at how it turned out. Thanks again, and if you ever ...

The first thing I will say is, "Oh my gosh! This is the beginning of a really good book." This is the type of stuff that I like to read. ...

The first thing I will say is, "Oh my gosh! This is the beginning of a really good book." This is the type of stuff that I like to read. ...

Hey, Azila! I just read your critique again. I guess I kind of forgot to reply to yours. No, that's actually not harsh at all compared to other critiques I've ...

Thank you, JellyBee! I appreciate your post. If you would ever like me to read any of your text, please feel free to PM me. :)

Lmao. Thank you both for the review. Truthfully, after reading your review Icaruss, I realized my stupidity... I just kind of wrote what I felt. I didn't mean to really ...

I am SO glad that I'm getting such positive feedback and some constructive criticism! Yeah, I don't really like typing in chat-speak. It's not appealing. :) Thanks everyone! If anyone ...

Wow! Thanks you guys. For my creative writing class, my teacher wants us to start writing a novel. She says by June 1st she wants us to have at least ...

Thanks. I actually planned on describing Payton further later. As for what you called chatspeak (OMG), that is part of her dialogue. How she speaks. I have many friends who ...