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Thank you Howl :) In all honesty, anything I do write will probably be really dark, though I'm not sure.

I wrote this, based on how i felt. I am sorry that it isn't original enough for you.

I really appreciate your kind words c: I wrote this last night after a fight with my girl, the words just poured out of me.

I'm glad you like it!! Thanks for the review c:

Thanks for another great review Iggy!! I know it's all pretty confusing, these few chapters are my stepping stone. If that makes any sense. I just have issues with writing ...

UUUGH. Okay, so I thought I had unpublished this right after I posted it, cause I was half asleep and didn't even edit it before I posted it >.< But ...

Thanks for the great review Hope!! Now that you've pointed out some of my mistakes, I do see the flaws clearer than I originally had. I'm just not the best ...

Thanks Iggy!! c: I'll make the changes to this chapter as soon as I can! I really appreciate your in detail review, and I assure you the chapters will get ...

Thanks RP! I'll make sure to do some editing as soon as I'm able to, but I haven't really had access to a computer these passed few days. I'll reread ...

I'll make sure he develops more in the oncoming chapters :) thanks so much!

I'll edit it as soon as I can, I was a little iffy about the sentence length cause I wasn't really sure what would be pushing it or not. Also, ...

Thanks for the review Adna. In all honesty, I want to go back and fix up my poem, make it smoother, but then I want to be able to look ...

Thanks for the words of encouragement Sinaryn! It really does mean a lot!

I like your suggestion for the first line, changing it to "But it is still so far" but the one after, using dire, I meant it as a way to ...

It's nice to know other people feel the same as me xD I could probably give you advice as a procrastinator as well! Or at least I would try to, ...