Mojosman

One man tries to help you identify what's wrong with you and which things you might change to make it all better but then after he dies (or you bastards ...

This was written..... interestingly. What I mean is that it has a very rushed and frantic style, as if the character was confused and desperate, and this is a look ...

Although you used the world of DnD as a starting point, this is still a very original work. I like the idea of a centuries long feud between races and ...

The exposition in this seems a little bit hamfisted. The "I forgot to introduce myself trope has been used over and over, and makes it feel like this is a ...

This is really interesting, and I like how ambigous this poem is kept. The way that the poem is formatted- with sentences cut short- really gives a feeling of something ...