Moalex

Chapter has been updated, and fleshed out a bit more. I would love to hear if its better, but if you don't want to read over the same chapter, it's ...

Hi Dreamy! Thanks for the review! I more or less understand what you're saying. Pretty much fleshing out the scenes rather than being very vague about it. I read in ...

Ah right, as to your question about the hair color. I was thinking something like a winter or aurora blue? I searched up "snow blue" to see if there was ...

Thanks for your advice Dreamy! Thank you for everything actually. Your reviews are always supportive, and it's these type of reviews that give me an understanding of what I can ...

Hi Dreamy! Thanks yet again for another solid review. I was hoping to start this chapter with a sort of ideology of what it meant to be a hero. The ...

Hi Paniko! Thanks for the Review, will definitely go over the description of the hospital to flesh out the scenery, and work on those nitpicks. As for everything else though, ...

Thanks for the review.

Ah, and questions concerning the characters so far will be revealed in the next chapter. Expect to be surprised.

Hi Dreamy! Once again, thank you for the review! It really does give me motivation to keep writing. As for all the typo nitpicks. I too find it surprising they ...

Hi Mellifera! The reason why I never offered a solution to what I think would make it more better to read is exactly because I never read your prior chapters. ...

Indeed, Nanny is not a big fan of them. She couldn't care less about what happened to the siblings. If she actually appeared to make a scene, it's showing that ...

Understood. However, brief descriptions means keeping it as simple as possible. I've already included a single paragraph of a "simple" and brief description of what happened between the hospital and ...

Hi Dreamy! Thanks for pointing out some nitpicks. Definitely going back to fix them up. In this case, would you suggest that this chapter be merged with the previous chapter ...

Also, chapter 3 is already out.

Hi Dreamy! Thank you for another review! First, I really want to express how much a positive review packed with a ton of questions regarding as to what is happening ...