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Re: Imperfection
Great poem...I can find no mistakes, but then again I was so absorbed in your poem I wouldn't have noticed.
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Re: Michelle's Story (Title needs revising!)
Woozy: If it's okay I will PM you some titles I thought of while reading this story. :)
Nov 4, 2009 -
Re: A little time
I think everyone pretty much covered what I was going to say. I agree with daydreamer9. Maybe you could change the "they smelled...sad" part a little, like daydreamer9 said. Thats ...
Nov 4, 2009 -
Re: Dried Apricots
Very good. At first thought, I had thought this poem would be quite silly. I was wrong. Awesome!
Nov 4, 2009 -
Re: Michelle's Story (Title needs revising!)
I agree with what everyone else has said. Your characters are very life-like, and the descriptive words you use make the story even better. Can't wait to read more.
Nov 4, 2009