Misty

so...why was it rated?

I just wanted you to know I had this story stuck in my head so I searched for it on YWS for forty five minutes before i finally found it...I ...

snoink: okaaaaaaaaaaay...sweet that you want to stand up for sam but...irrelevant. I know how amazing sam is, I'm just saying it didn't interest me much. my opinion.

hi sam...erm...this is...different. I can't say as it's my favorite thing you've ever written, but I have confidence that it will grow steadily better. And yeah...new title definately in order.

P.S. Fill in sections tend to be crap. It's the stuff the reader doesn't usually want to read. Try to exnay all of your fill-in sections, and replace them w/ ...

ah, i missed that. :O

:P I'm still waiting for more :D

Green Day is the awesomest band in the existance of the universe!!!!! SO UH! lol, j/k punk/rock. All else is BLASPHEMY!!!!

:P yes they are.

HAHA! I KNEW IT! Considering that Jeremy is always breaking windows and doing "dirty things in dark alleyways" as i believe you phrased it. ...actually your wording was diferent but ...

yes, it was your true story. Lol-remember the original draft! haha :D

*narrows eyes* I liked it too! ...actually he's right, for-or despite- such a lack of description it's quite easy to visualize. At least I have it all pictured out. The ...

I had rather figured that out by myself. At least I knew it was to a painter of sorts. Anyway I felt compelled to figure out WHY I don't like ...

thanks to everyone who critted this. :P

I didn't like it. I didn't get it. I found it to be repetitive and boring. The title was good though.