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Re: Prologue
Hello! :) I'm just going to start with just little nitpicks I found: but Katrinia loves the loved to meddle Also, I found the repetition of the word 'life' seemed ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Savior Chapter 1
Hey, Xiahouzay! Since you're new to YWS, I'll just start this review off with a quick welcome... so WELCOME! :D So the first thing I noticed when I read your ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: The Diary Of Harriet McCully Chapter 1
Why, hello there! :D So the first thing I noticed about this piece of writing was its length. It's pretty short and as Sopster above said, I think it would ...
Feb 24, 2011 -
Re: A Burdened Afterthought
Oh, I really like this poem! I really "connected" to it when I read it as it was definitely relatable and easy to understand. We've all experienced losing friends and ...
Feb 24, 2011