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Re: Things I Hate
The rhyming was really good, I like the flow of it in my mind whilst reading it. Rhyming is good :)
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter, Voldemort and a cookie.
Wicked. I loved it. "Voldie" is classic and its funny how you just decided to throw Hermione in at the end! I love writing parody like stories like this. ;oD
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: I met a girl today
I really liked your poem. Its full of description and you used great similies and metaphores! Write more so I can read them!!!
Dec 18, 2010