MissGangamash

Thank you so much! Argh! I am useless at editing my own work! Thanks for pointing out my mistakes. Sorting them out now :P 'Compelling' is a sort of vampire ...

Thank you! And I am :D

It is a little long, I guess, but not that much happens in it. I think the length would have been more of an issue if it was like super ...

I'm sorry about the perspective thing, I'm still getting used to writing in 3rd person. I've edited it a little now so it's all from Caius' POV except the first ...

Oh, thanks for pointing it out, just changed it :) Darn, I thought I had got all the tense mistakes. I'm glad you liked it and thank you for commenting ...

I'm glad you liked it and you didn't sound mean at all, it's just your opinion :) And the reason why I didn't include a lot of feeling is because ...

Thank you :) It's the first time I have written in the second person myself. I have just looked at the website and it looks very interesting. I might give ...

Thank you so much for the comment. I'm happy you thought it was beautiful in a twisted sort of way haha. My grammar can be a bit off sometimes but ...

Thank you so much for the comment. I'm glad you liked it :) This is the only piece I have written in the second person, I was just trying out ...