MissGangamash

Thanks for pointing out the mistakes! I'm hoping at some point there will be none XD I'm glad you liked it! This is the start of a big turning point ...

Thank you so much for checking it out and the lovely comment. I'm glad you liked it :D

Haha, I've decided to wait for Chapter 20 so you're safe. I'm gonna save it for when the price goes back to 250 because I've not got much coins to ...

Thanks for pointing those out, I've sorted them :) The bit in the italics was supposed to be in italics but it was the tense that was wrong. Fixed it! ...

Thanks for pointing out the errors! I really do edit before I upload but I'm pretty hopeless XD I think I got a bit excited with the killings, making me ...

I'll have a look into those paragraphs you've pointed out. I'm glad you like Joe, the new addition ^_^ He is pretty important. Yeah, it was very sad what the ...

Whoops, 'callous' was supposed to be 'calloused', my bad. It's kind of hard to get the middle ground by not revealing too much but also not getting people confused. I ...

Thanks for the lovely review :D This is one of my favourite chapters ^_^ I think it separates these characters from the stupidly optimistic ones that, unfortunately, crop up a ...

I promise you that this is nothing like Twilight, I hate those books with a passion haha. They've given vampire books a bad reputation.

Don't worry, I totally wanted that reaction! Yes, it's sad that they have broken up after living such a long life together but everything you said is spot on and ...

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :) And all those words are written in the UK way and are spelt correctly :)

Thank you, I'll make those adjustments :) The thing with Catherine just being a fleeting comment is on purpose. She is mentioned throughout the novel (at first in the prologue) ...

Happy Review Day to you too ^_^ The car would be very old. Ancient like Caius ;) Some people like old cars so I don't think it would be anything ...

Thanks for pointing out the mistakes, I've fixed them :) Evie has quite serious in her thoughts because she hasn't lived the easiest of lives and she's having problems at ...

Hello :) The term 'nightwalkers' is quite important and I want it to be included but maybe when I'm editing again, I might slip it into the dialogue instead. It ...