MissGangamash

Hello! I'll keep that in mind about the descriptions about the protest. I didn't want to go into too much detail, to show how Wallace wasn't really 'in' it mentally. ...

Hello! I know the present part feels a bit weird at the start of the chapter, but in book form it will be in the middle of the chapter so ...

Wallace is very much starting to truly crumble. I agree that he's his happiest and the most 'himself' when he is with Kaspar and Mirabelle, but with Kaspar married to ...

Hello! In a way, Wallace and Kaspar are both playing parts in their lives - Wallace being a jester, and Kaspar pretending to be a happy prince with no worries. ...

So sorry you've had such a terrible past. But do not blame yourself for not 'reacting correctly.' We live in a world of victim blaming and it's sick, but it's ...

I love that you see how Wallace separates himself others. I wanted that to be a main theme of the story - how Wallace, a jester by profession, has almost ...

I think Wallace is always just waiting for the other shoe to drop, so much so that he is causing a problem where there may not even be one. You're ...

This whole story is very much Wallace having a pretty severe identity crisis. He looked at the palace through rose-tinted glasses, but now visiting, the sad truth has hit him. ...

Youre getting coins but not reviewing. Thats against the rules of the site. If you have a positive message to say put it on peoples pages if you absolutely have ...

Then why post it in the review section of my work?

Yeah, it%u2019s not related.

Hello! I wanted Alta to radiate a sort of quiet strength. I think that was part of the reason Wallace was so drawn to her and wants to keep her ...

Hello! I really enjoy writing Lady Delphine. She doesn't have many scenes but I feel she's got an essence about her. In a way, she is just as lonely as ...

Ah right that makes sense!

I think it's been a while since there's been a flashback so glad you still like the way I transition into them. It's tough finding the best spots to slip ...