MissGangamash

Thank you so much :D

Hello! Thank you for your lovely review! Yes, this is a recent perspective switch, hence the backstory at the start. The whole Milah/Caius relationship has been hinted at throughout the ...

Thank you for your lovely review! This is my first attempt at poetry so I didn't really know how people would respond. In terms of tone, I was aiming for ...

I don't shy away from a bit of gore! Haha. You weren't supposed to have an emotional attachment to Sophie. She was just to show the severity of Evie's situation. ...

Evie is just kind of hollow in this chapter, she doesn't really have enough in her to be angry - hence why after she fell in the bathroom, she just ...

Thank you :) The story starts taking a drastic turn from now on. The flashback was just because that was the last time Evie had ever experienced the burn of ...

One persons curiosity is another persons confusion haha, we'll agree to disagree :)

Thank you :) This is a chapter of a novel... Have you read the previous chapters? Because the story is already pretty fleshed out. This is the middle of the ...

You haven't stepped out of line or offended me, don't worry. I rather enjoy feedback like this because it shows what people pick up on, and what you have is ...

Yeah, I think the issue is the tone of the novel as a whole. The tone is intentional though, everything I've done is intentional and most of my long winded ...

Howdy! The point of Michaels interaction was a) to show how the Dial-a-bite service works, because I know if I just told and didn't show, people would be like 'you ...

Fixed it! I think...

Caius' Maker is around, but Caius is an ancient vampire so he has less need to be guided. He has a rather sugnificant relationship with his Maker, which you'd learn ...

Hello again :) Yeah, Evie is incredibly lonely, to basically have to buy company is pretty sad :( Ah yes, the hobo scene! You are right about her stress eating. ...

Thank you so much! :') Nico letting Evie see Caius one last time was to show that he isn't a complete monster, he could see the desperation in Evie. The ...