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Re: Wonders Lost: Prologue
Hello! Thanks for reading and I've seen you've read to chapter 2 so thank you again! I'll have a look over your suggestions, I'm constantly editing this as I go ...
Jul 30, 2017 -
Re: The Artist
Hi! It is a bit ambiguous and you'd probably understand it more if you watch Supernatural, as its based on that. I did mean blood spray. The hell hounds tore ...
Jul 28, 2017 -
Re: The Artist
Hello! I'll sort out the grammatical and punctuation errors. I don't really write poetry so I don't know the rules This is based on Supernatural (best show ever) so you ...
Jul 28, 2017 -
Re: The Artist
Hello! I don't really write poetry but this just came to me the other night. I studied it in highschool but I still don't really understand the rules and regs ...
Jul 28, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Epilogue
Thank you so much
Jul 14, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Epilogue
Dammit with the typos!! Thanks for pointing them out though XD I thought Caius' voice was a good one to end on because he is very reflective and thoughtful. And ...
Jul 14, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 51
I checked the date of when I first uploaded and was like 'Whhhaaaaattttt?!' This isn't even the first website I've uploaded this on so I actually started it waaaay before ...
Jul 14, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 50
The chapters at the beginning of the novel were pretty slow and I felt like the ending needed to draw to a close at the same pace to feel balanced. ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 49
Yas, we are back with Team Farmhouse! I just came up with that XD Ahh, I see what you mean about doing the bond breaking thing before realising Alexander is ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 48
The scene with Alexander having Nico tied to the chair is one of my favourites. Nico is pathetic - at this point you see just how much of a silly ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 47
I didn't want it to go straight from plan to action and the almost fight was another indicator of how weak Alexander is now. I'm glad you like the dream ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 46
I am such an evil human being! I'm so sorry, Seb *runs and hide in the corner* Seb's death is horrible and tragic and everyone's reactions to it have been ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Unnatural Enemies: Part 1
Hi! Thank you for taking the time to read and review, I will be getting to those mistakes at some point. Most of the stuff I write is about the ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 46
Hi, is this a review for another piece of work? Because it doesn't fit with this.
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 45
Nico isn't really supposed to be threatening, that's why he is always being compared to a school boy. At the end of the day, he's just a man. A man ...
Jul 12, 2017
