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Re: The Rage (Chapter 13)
Hi, the reason the site is done the way it is is so that writers can support each other. So yes, if you are here selfishly to just get your ...
Nov 9, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 12)
Becca and Gabriel are so cute. I love them together. This curfew is like corona lockdown. We've all completed Netflix XD Ayyye, Court is in session! I'll upload the next ...
Nov 8, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 12)
All this doom and gloom is definitely getting to Ezra! Glad you're liking the world I've created :D I'm hoping to upload quicker but I just don't want to fill ...
Nov 5, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 11)
Hello again! Yes, Ian is not a nice dude! He's very smarmy and sure of himself -_- I felt like 16 is good for common swears but anything overly sexual ...
Nov 3, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 10)
Great to have you back! This book is a slow build up but in the next few chapters, things will start kicking off.
Nov 3, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 11)
Hello! Oooh interesting! I'll see if I can find that story and give it a read. We've reached the tipping point! It's all downhill from here D: (Although it was ...
Oct 29, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 7)
You're finally here! Most of the things you have pointed out - like clunky sentences, have been fixed on the real word doc but I'll have another look over. As ...
Oct 29, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 10)
Becca is the type of person we aspire to be XD Yes, things aren't looking good! It's slowly dawning on everyone that this is not a joke. They need to ...
Oct 23, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 9)
I'm glad you thought the convo was useful. This is a prequel to another story where the vampire..ness is already established, but for readers who haven't read that, I thought ...
Oct 21, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 8)
Even just saying you're enjoying the story and getting me out of the Green Room is helpful so don't feel the need to have to say anything else if there ...
Oct 21, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 7)
Hey! Glad you're back! I try to do as much exposition through dialogue but as I try to keep it as natural as possible, sometimes things just need to be ...
Oct 19, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 9)
I like to highlight how bad humans can be through the scope of vampires who are always depicted as the monsters - so I'm glad you picked up on that. ...
Oct 19, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 8)
Hello again! Ahh, I always get mixed up with 'passed' and 'past' XD I do feel like if vamps were real my immediate thought would be 'how old are they?' ...
Oct 13, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 6: Part 1)
Hey! I had thought you'd forgotten about me haha. I thiiink I've changed all those corrections on the actual document. I'm so glad you enjoyed my writing! And if you ...
Oct 12, 2020 -
Re: The Rage (Chapter 4: Part 2)
Hey! Sorry it took so long for me to reply. Thanks for the review and getting this out of the green room!
Oct 11, 2020
