MissGangamash

It has definitely been some bloody chapters! How will the rest of the story pan out 0_o Ben's death has definitely shaken them all up! Well... the vampires certainly aren't ...

Hello again! Glad you liked the fight scene! Yes, we finally got to see Ezra in action! Nice suggestion, I fix that in the edit. Thank you!

Yes, it is the beginning of the end D: I wanted Maeve to be a realistic character (well, I want them all to be.) Her and Becca balance each other ...

There has been a lot of build up! We're getting to the climax now. Just a few chapters left!

On top of Gabriel hurting Becca, he's just proved Ezra that he'd been right all along. And the he gets blamed for something he has no idea about! I agree, ...

Aren't too graphic* is what I meant XD

OOooh I'm glad you're thinking about what's going on in the background. Something is definitely happening... And no problem! The sexual scenes are too graphic but I totally respect your ...

Yep, Lillian's gone D: Gabriel is really out there thinking that Ezra is a dumbass XD And there is a silent power in Ezra at his ability to not rub ...

Hey! I totally forgot that I didn't mention anything about that. When it comes to vampires, I feel like that wouldn't really have much money issues because, for these guys, ...

For some reason I didn't get notified about your reviews so apologies for the late replies! Lillian is just so done, she doesn't have the energy to be angry or ...

Hello! Yes, Silas does care very deeply about Ezra. He just has a funny way of showing it. He's a 'show them you care by teaching them to be touch' ...

It also depends on who your target audience is. If this is middle grade fiction, then how you%u2019re writing is fine. But if this is for an older audience, less ...

Each to their own, I guess. I just said it because it was points that my tutors tended to make about peoples work in my class (I%u2019ve just graduated with ...

I love seeing people enjoy this story when they are not already vampire lovers. This story is more about the humanity that the vampires do possess - and which, sadly, ...

I feel like I have failed if I haven't finished a novel, thankfully I've had a lot of time of my hands lately... probably the only good thing to come ...