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Re: Sinner - A Messenger
TheGuiltyOne! Hai, haaaii, haaaaaaaaaaiiii! x) It's been in my process of contemplation for far too many days now to review your stuff but sometimes you just can't help getting caught ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Continue?
Alright, Remember. Hey there. ^^ This piece, despite it's length, makes you feel all happy and stuff. Although you don't know much about the girl, you know she's been through ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: sense is gone, gone with the wind
Haha, incest much? This is good, very good, very captivating. Although it's similar to the story of Fight Club, I enjoyed it a lot. The grotesque fight you've managed to ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: Nelson (temporary title)
Hey! :D This is your first? You sure? If yes, then it's pretty darn good! You've done a very good job in portraying the boy's determination for making a change ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: The Serpent Tooth (Basic Version)
Since this is a fantasy short story, it rather fancies children but reading it, I couldn't really place my finger on any morale to be told. The plot's OK, he ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: How To Crash A Wedding
LumiLumiLumi. I have only just recently started reviewing and stuff and you were definitely on my list but owing to your prowess at poetry (I'm not very good at poetry), ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Toy Guns
thatoddkid. What really is your name, dude? You're beyond amazing. I've been reading your stories and each and every one of them left me in a daze after I finished ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Story told in Colors
I must give you this, you're getting better and better and I see no downfall whatsoever. But that might also be a personal notion because to me, emotions are ZE ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Letter of Guidance
Hey there! I see for someone as young as you, you seem to be very understanding. Now that's a very good thing but about the writer in you, you need ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Unrequited
Naaaiiceeee. 8D But yeah, here goes my review:- "Time in which Angie has grown up, from the girl who always wore baby-pink dresses and had her hair done in two ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: (Deleted)
All in all, this was a touchy piece and the emotions flowed through. Imma say, very good work. The lexis, grammar, punctuation and syntax were well done. The only part ...
Oct 6, 2011 -
Re: Their Love Will Live On
ShadowPrincess16, this was just any typical tragic love story. Creativity here was redundant and it is more than predictable about what's to come next. Bland, to be honest, because there's ...
Oct 5, 2011